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Я нарисовал самолет на втором или третьем занятии и Вы сказали, что он Вам очень понравился. Я защищал свой рисунок вместе с финским парнем. Я понимаю, что я сделал неправильно первый доклад, но я исправил все свои ошибки во втором. Я выучил материал и выступил очень хорошо. Эта отметка очень важна для меня.
Поэтому я прошу Вас повысить её, пожалуйста

С уважением

Результаты (английский) 1:

I painted the plane on the second or third lesson, and you said that you liked. I defended your figure together with the Finnish guy. I understand what I did wrong the first report, but I have corrected all the mistakes in the second. I learned stuff and made very well. This mark is very important to me. So I ask you to raise her, pleaseWith respect

Результаты (английский) 2:

I painted the plane to the second or third lesson, and you said that you liked it. I defended his drawing with a Finnish guy. I understand what I did wrong the first report, but I have corrected all the mistakes in the second. I learned the material and made ​​very well. This mark is very important to me.
So I ask you to increase it, please Sincerely

Результаты (английский) 3:

i drew a plane on the second or third class and you said you really like. i was protecting my figure, together with the finnish guy. i know what i did wrong the first reportbut i fixed all the errors in the second. i learned the material and made very well. this mark is very important for me.
so i'm asking you to improve it, please

with respect.