Благодаря этим людям я выучила язык

Благодаря этим людям я выучила язык, осталась работать на кафедре, защитила диссертацию и теперь получила этот орден.

Результаты (английский) 1:

Thanks to these people I learned the language remained to work at the Department, defended the thesis and now received this order.

Результаты (английский) 2:

Thanks to these people, I learned the language, remained to work at the department, defended her thesis and has now received this award.

Результаты (английский) 3:

thanks to those people, i learned the language, is to work for the thesis, defended and now received this order.