Я обратил внимание на то, что сайт

Я обратил внимание на то, что сайт вашего университета мог бы быть более представительным, информативным, иметь современное оформление, поддерживать отображение на мобильных устройствах, и что еще немаловажно он мог бы более обширно и акцентированно представлять деятельность университета, т.е. помимо информативной роли сайт может играть роль отчетности по освоению образовательных программ, проектов и т.д. финансируемых государством, а это по моему опыту является хорошим политическим инструментом.

Результаты (английский) 1:

I've noticed that the website of your University could be more representative, informative, have a modern décor, to display on a mobile device, and what else is important it could vastly and elaborated on to represent the University, i.e. in addition to the informative role of the site can play the role of reporting on the development of educational programs, publicly funded projects, etc., and this is in my experience is a good political tool.

Результаты (английский) 2:

I drew attention to the fact that the site of your university could be more personable, informative, have a modern design, support the display on mobile devices, and that's more important he could be more extensive and accented represent activities of the University, ie in addition to the informative role site may play a role reporting on the development of educational programs, projects, etc. publicly funded, and in my experience it is a good political tool.

Результаты (английский) 3:

I drew attention to the fact that site your university could be more representative, informative, have a modern design, support the display on mobile devices,And that is still not least he could have been more extensive and акцентированно to represent the activities of the university, i.e. , the informative role of the site may play a role in reporting development educational programs,Projects, etc. state-funded, and this is in my experience is a good political tool.