на следующий день когда Фред пришел

на следующий день когда Фред пришел в парк, он понял,что Элеонора уже приходила туда, так как он увидел свежий цветок магнолии на скамейки. Фред не пошел за Элеонорой, но он приходил на эту скамейку каждый день, в надежде увидеть ее снова

Результаты (английский) 1:

the next day, when Fred came to the Park, he realized that Eleanor had already come back, because he saw the fresh flower of Magnolia on the bench. Fred went for Eleanor, but he came on this bench every day, hoping to see it again

Результаты (английский) 2:

the next day when Fred came to the park, he saw that Eleanor has already come back, as he saw fresh magnolia flower on the bench. Fred did not go for Eleanor, but he came on the bench every day, hoping to see her again

Результаты (английский) 3:

the next day, when fred came to the park, he realized that eleanor had already got there, he saw a fresh flower on the bench. fred didn"t go for eleanor, but he came here every day, hoping to see her again.