This looks great. My only comment i

This looks great. My only comment is the arc of the teeth on the beast in the original. They almost reach out themselves to bite her..where yours kind of have a more downward feel...is subtle..but a big deal on how the feel is. The original almost feels like he's trying to suck her into his mouth and the teeth are reaching out to get her...yours is close...but I think those few pixels are changing the feel of yours a little bit.

Once that is tweaked this image is approved.

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This looks great. My only comment is the arc of the teeth on the beast in the original. They almost reach out themselves to bite her. ..where yours kind of have a more downward feel ... it is subtle and. ..but a big deal on how the feel is. The original almost feels like he's trying to suck her into his mouth and the teeth are reaching out to get her ... and yours is close to ...but I think those few pixels are changing the feel of yours a little bit.

Once that is tweaked this image is approved.

Read more: ixzz3BIhlmXQK
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This looks great. My only comment is the arc of the teeth on the beast in the original. They almost reach out themselves to bite her..where yours kind of have a more downward feel ... is subtle..but a big deal on how the feel is. The original Almost feels like he's Trying to suck her into His mouth and the teeth are reaching out to her ... Get yours is close ... But I think Those few pixels are changing the feel of yours A little bit. Once That is tweaked this Image is APPROVED. Read more: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php/279624-Bobby-Rebholz-Composition-1-2#ixzz3BIhlmXQK

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