Что значит «современный человек» ?

Что значит «современный человек» ? (Сочинение-рассуждение)
В нашем городе много модных магазинов, салонов, где можно одеться с головы до ног (если, конечно, есть деньги) и выглядеть современно. Можно сделать стильную прическу - и ты вроде идешь в ногу со временем. Но я не случайно написала «как будто» . Все это только внешняя сторона дела. Конечно, элегантно одетая, ухоженная человек привлекает к себе внимание окружающих. Однако только грамотная речь, умение вести разговор сразу же дадут твоему собеседнику понять, что он имеет дело не с пустой, а действительно с современным человеком, который знает себе цену. А эти качества в магазине, или посещая парикмахерскую, к сожалению, не приобретешь.
Современный человек - это состояние души, мышления. Оно достигается путем упорного обучения, работы над собой. Понятно, что духовность современного человека закладывается в школе. Именно здесь он получает первые знания и представления о жизни.
Некоторые мои сверстники уже сейчас знают, кем бы они хотели быть. Они изучают иностранные языки, компьютер, много читают. И, конечно, немало времени проводят в спортзале. Я думаю, те, кто стремится открыть для себя нечто новое, и есть современные люди.

Результаты (английский) 1:

What does it mean to "modern man"? (Essay-an essay) In our city has many trendy shops, salons, where you can get dressed from head to toe (if, of course, is money) and look modern. You can make a stylish hairstyle and you kind of go in step with the times. But I do not accidentally wrote "as if". All this is only the outer side of the case. Of course, elegantly dressed, well groomed man attracts attention. However, only competent speech, ability to conduct a conversation immediately give your interlocutor to understand that he is dealing not with an empty, but with a modern man who knows her worth. And these qualities in store, or visiting the hairdresser, unfortunately, do not purchase. Modern man is a State of mind, thinking. It is achieved through hard training, work on yourself. It is clear that the spirituality of modern man is laid in the school. It was here that he first gets the knowledge and ideas about life. Some of my peers now know who they wanted to be. They learn foreign languages, computer, many people read it. And, of course, a lot of time in the gym. I think those who want to discover something new, and there are modern people.

Результаты (английский) 2:

What does "modern man"? (Writer-argument)
In our city there are many boutiques, salons, where you can dress from head to toe (unless, of course, have the money), and look modern. You can make a stylish haircut - and you kind of go with the times. But I do not accidentally wrote "as if". All this is only the outer side of the case. Of course, elegantly dressed, well-groomed man attracts the attention of others. However, only a competent speech, the ability to conduct a conversation immediately give your interlocutor to understand that he is dealing not with a blank, and indeed modern man who knows his worth. And these qualities in the store, or by visiting the barber shop, it is unfortunately not priobretesh.
Modern man - a state of mind, thinking. It is achieved through hard training, work on oneself. It is clear that the spirituality of modern man is laid in school. It was here that he received the first knowledge and understanding of life.
Some of my peers already know who they want to be. They learn foreign languages, computer, read a lot. And, of course, a lot of time in the gym. I think those who want to discover something new, and there are people today.

Результаты (английский) 3:

what do you mean, "modern man"? (essay - reasoning)
in our city a lot of shops, salons, where you can get dressed from head to toe (unless, of course, there's the money) and look modern.you can make a stylish hair and you're going to step with the times. but i don't accidentally wrote "будто». it is only the outer side of the case. of course, elegantly dressed,well groomed people attracted attention. however, only the educated speech, the ability to talk immediately give you could be sent directly to understand that he is not dealing with emptyand indeed with the modern man who knows himself. these qualities in the store, or by visiting the barber, unfortunately, don't get.
the modern man is a state of mind, thinking.it is achieved through persistent training, work on yourself. clearly, the spirituality of modern man is in the school. it was here that he obtains the knowledge and perception of life.
some of my peers already know what they want to be. they learn foreign languages, computer, a lot of reading. and, of course, a lot of time they spend at the gym. i think thosewho seeks to discover something new and modern people.