Она слышала, как её отец ходит взад

Она слышала, как её отец ходит взад и вперёд по террасе. Строго говоря, это не совсем то, что я хотела сказать.Том увидел, что в воде что-то быстро движется.Приехав домой, он увидел, что его совсем не ждали. Холодные лучи заходящего солнца освещают вершины деревьев. Он заметил, что за ним кто-то следит и, поняв это, решил изменить свой путь.Было слышно, как где-то вдалеке играла музыка. Судя по тому, как ласково она на него смотрит, он ей нравится.Видя, что собираются тучи,мы решили отложить прогулку.

Результаты (английский) 1:

She heard her father walking up and down the terrace.
Strictly speaking, this is not exactly what I wanted to say.
Tom saw that the water is something moving rapidly.
Once home, he saw that it was not expected.
Cold rays of the sun illuminate the tops of the trees.
He noticed that someone was watching him and, realizing this, I decided to change my path.
I could hear in the distance the music played.
Judging by how tenderly she looks at him, she liked him.
Seeing that the storm clouds gather, we decided to postpone the trip.

Результаты (английский) 2:

She heard her father walking up and down the terrace.
Strictly speaking, that's not exactly what I wanted to say.
Tom saw that something was moving fast in the water.
When he arrived home, he saw that he was not expected at all.
The cold rays of the setting sun illuminate the tops of trees.
He noticed that someone was following him and, realizing it, decided to change his path.
You could hear music playing in the distance.
Judging by the way she looks at him, she likes him.
Seeing that the clouds are going, we decided to postpone the walk.

Результаты (английский) 3:

She heard her father come back from the balcony.
Strictly speaking, this is not what I want to say.
Tom saw something moving fast in the water.
When he came home, he saw no one waiting for him.
The cold light of the setting sun illuminated the treetops.
He noticed that he was being watched and, aware of this, decided to change his way.
Hear music playing somewhere in the distance.
From her gentle look at him, she likes him.
Seeing the dark clouds, we decided to postpone our walk.