Спасибо за ваши замечания. Они очен

Спасибо за ваши замечания. Они очень ясны для меня. Если вы разрешите я буду отправлять исправленный вариант по частям. Я планирую, что я устраню данные замечания до воскресения.
Для меня было бы полезным встретиться с вами, но к сожалению в настоящий момент я нахожусь в Казахстане. Если вы позволите мы можем связаться по Skype в удобное для вас время. Если нет мы можем работать через почту.
Планирую приехать в Англию 3 сентября и готов встретиться с вами 5 сентября как и планировалось. Надеюсь на ваше понимание, а также хочу поблагодарить вас за вашу помощь.
Мне пришлось выехать в Казахстан так как моя семья находится здесь. Я приложу все усилия, чтобы успешно завершить мою диссертацию, так как это является для меня и моей семьи жизненно важной. Надеюсь на ваше понимание.

Результаты (английский) 1:

Thanks for your comments. They are very clear for me. If you allow, I will send the corrected version. I plan what I remove these comments until the resurrection. It would be useful for me to meet with you, but unfortunately at the moment I'm in Kazakhstan. If you let we can contact via Skype at any time convenient for you. If not we can work through the mail. Plan to arrive in England on September 3 and ready to meet you 5 September as planned. Hope for your understanding, and I also want to thank you for your help. I had to travel to Kazakhstan because my family is here. I shall make every effort to successfully complete my thesis, as it is for me and my family are vital. Hope for your understanding.

Результаты (английский) 2:

Thank you for your comments. They are very clear to me. If you allow, I will send a corrected version in parts. I plan, I will eliminate these observations before the resurrection.
For me it would be useful to meet with you, but unfortunately at the moment I am in Kazakhstan. If you allow, we can be contacted by Skype in convenient time for you. If not, we can work through the mail.
I plan to come to England on September 3 and is ready to meet you on September 5 as planned. I hope for your understanding, and thank you for your help.
I had to leave for Kazakhstan because my family is here. I will make every effort to successfully complete my thesis, as it is for me and my family, vital. I hope for your understanding.

Результаты (английский) 3:

Thank you for your comments. They are very clear to me. If you allow me I will send you an amended version on parts. I intend that i am устраню data observations to resurrection.
For me it would be useful to meet with you, but unfortunately at the moment I am in Kazakhstan. If you will allow we can contact on Skype at a time that is convenient for you. If not we can work through mail.
I am planning to travel to England on 3 September and was ready to meet with you on 5 September as planned. I hope for your understanding, as well as i would like to thank you for your assistance.
I had to leave for Kazakhstan as my family is here. I shall make every effort to successfully complete my thesis, as it is for me and my family is vitally important. I hope for your understanding.