Сначала я ездила в банк,потом в маг

Сначала я ездила в банк,потом в магазины,потом готовила обед и закуски на зиму,у нас в России так принято,затем нужно было идти в мою квартиру,где идёт ремонт и кое что сделать для ремонта.

Результаты (английский) 1:

First I went to the Bank, then in the stores, then cooked lunch and snacks for the winter, here in Russia so accepted, then you had to go to my apartment, where repair and something done to repair.

Результаты (английский) 2:

First I went to the bank, then to the stores, and then cooking dinner and snacks for the winter, here in Russia so it is accepted, then had to go to my apartment, where there is a repair and do something to repair.

Результаты (английский) 3:

First, I spent in the bank,then in shops,then prepared lunch and snacks during the winter months, we have taken both in Russia,and then it was to go to my apartment,where is repair and some that need to be done for the repair.