Когда она снова вернулась на сцену

Когда она снова вернулась на сцену после большого перерыва , то она не смогла добиться успеха . Все понимали ,что она упустила свое время .
Он приписывал свой провал собственной глупости .
Несколько лет назад 40-летний адвокат сделал ей предложение ,но она отказала ему и предпочла остаться незамужней .

Результаты (английский) 2:

When she returned to the stage after a long break, it could not succeed. Everyone knew that she missed the time.
He attributed his failure of his own stupidity.
Several years ago, 40-year-old lawyer, had proposed to her, but she refused him and chose to remain unmarried.

Результаты (английский) 3:

When she again returned to the scene after a break, it was not able to achieve success. All understand ,that it had missed its time .
it exercise its failure own stupidity .
A few years ago 40-year-old lawyer made her proposal ,but she refused him and would prefer to remain unmarried.