Во-первых, я хочу улучшить уровень

Во-первых, я хочу улучшить уровень английского языка. Потому что английский-это международный язык, его должен знать каждый человек. К тому же, он очень красивый. После окончания школы я бы хотела уехать в Канаду, для того, чтобы получить там высшее образование и устроиться на высокооплачиваемую работу. Поэтому мне необходимо очень хорошо знать английский язык. В нашей школе работают замечательные учителя, который преподают английский, но мне этого не хватает. Нужна ежедневная практика. Если я поеду в Америку по программе обмена, то значительно улучшу знания английского языка.
Во-вторых, Америка-очень большая и многонациональная страна. Там много интересных мест, достопримечательностей. Я бы очень хотела посетить аллею звёзд Голливуда, долину монументов, мост "золотые ворота", Глейшер. Также мне очень хочется познакомиться с англо-говорящим населением, получить новые знания, попробовать пожить в чужой стране одной.

Результаты (английский) 1:

Firstly, I want to improve English level. Because English is the international language, everyone should know it. Besides, it is very beautiful. After high school I wanted to go to Canada, in order to obtain higher education and find a paying job. So I need very good English. In our school work wonderful teachers who teach English, but I do not have enough. Need a daily practice. If I go to America on an Exchange program, significantly raised the knowledge of English. Secondly, America-very large and multinational country. There are many interesting places and sights. I would really like to visit the alley of stars of Hollywood, Monument Valley, Golden Gate Bridge, Glacier. Also I'd like to get acquainted with the English-speaking population, acquire new knowledge, to try to live in a foreign country.

Результаты (английский) 2:

Firstly, I want to improve the level of English. Because English is the international language, it has to know everyone. Besides, it is very beautiful. After high school, I would like to go to Canada, in order to get higher education there and get a paying job. Therefore, I need very good English. Our school has excellent teachers who teach English, but I did not have enough. We need daily practice. If I go to America on an exchange program, it will significantly improve the English language skills.
Secondly, America is very large and diverse country. There are many interesting places of interest. I would love to visit the avenue of stars of Hollywood, Monument Valley, the bridge "Golden Gate", Glacier. Also, I'd like to get acquainted with the English-speaking population, to acquire new knowledge, to try to live in a foreign country.

Результаты (английский) 3:

first of all, i want to improve their english. because english is the international language, he must know every man. besides, he is very handsome. after graduating from high school i want to go to canadain order to obtain higher education and get a high paying job. so i need a good knowledge of english. our school has excellent teacherstaught english, but i don't have enough. need to practice every day. if i go to america on an exchange program, greatly can improve the knowledge of english.
second,america is a multi-ethnic country. there are a lot of interesting places, landmarks. i really would like to visit the alley stars of hollywood, the monuments' golden gate bridge, glacier national park.also, i really want to meet with the english speaking population, to obtain new knowledge, to try to live in a foreign country alone.