Когда один из незнакомцев потребова

Когда один из незнакомцев потребовал, чтобы бракосочетание было прервано (to break off the ceremony), мистер Рочестер вздрогнул, словно перед ним разверзлась (to open) пропасть.

Результаты (английский) 1:

When one of the strangers demanded that the wedding was interrupted (to break off the ceremony), Mr Rochester shuddered like a yawning before him (to open) the abyss.

Результаты (английский) 2:

When one of the strangers demanded that the wedding was interrupted (to break off the ceremony), Mr. Rochester shudder, as if in front of him opened up (to open) abyss.

Результаты (английский) 3:

When one of the strangers demanded that marriage was interrupted (to break off the сeremоny), Mr Rochester Linda, as though before it willed (to open) the gap.