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Тема моей дипломной работы "Эффективность железных дорог". На сегодняшний день эта тема является важной частью железнодорожного транспорта России и Европы. Плохая эффективность железных дорог приводит к низкой работе транспорта. Люди пользуются железной дорогой каждый день, например электричками, чтобы добраться от посёлка до города. На основе проделанной работы были предложены основные факторы, как улучшить эффективность и сделать все, чтобы эффективность железных дорог не снизилась. В книге были выделены проблемы железных дорог, почему они возникают и какого их решение. Также, при переводе, я узнала много слов по своей специальности, что у одного слова бывает несколько значений по разным темам, такие как бизнес, экономика и другие. Данная книга заинтересовала меня всеми возможными проблемами на железных дорогах, это хороший опыт, знать какого их решение и что может быть плохого, если оставить эти проблемы без внимания.
Спасибо за внимание!

Результаты (английский) 1:

Hello dear members of the Commission! The topic of my thesis "the efficiency of the railways". To date, this theme is an important part of railway transport in Russia and Europe. Poor efficiency of railways leads to low transport work. People use the railway every day, such as tram to get from the village to the city. On the basis of the work done, the main factors were suggested to improve efficiency and make the efficiency of railways. Problems were highlighted in his book railways, why they occur and what their decision. Also, when translating, I learned many words in his specialty, that one word happens to be several meanings on different topics, such as business, economics, and others. The book interested me all possible problems on the railways, it is a good experience to know what their decision and what could be wrong if you leave these problems without attention. Thanks for your attention!

Результаты (английский) 2:

Hello dear members of the commission!
The subject of my thesis "Efficiency of Railways." To date, this issue is an important part of railway transport of Russia and Europe. Poor efficiency of the railways leading to the lowest transport. People use the railway each day, such as electric trains to get from the village to the city. On the basis of this work have been offered the main factors to improve efficiency and to do everything to the effectiveness of the railways has declined. The book had highlighted the problems of railways, why they occur and what their decision. Also, in the translation, I learned a lot of words in their specialty that one word is more than one value for a variety of topics such as business, economics and others. This book interested me all the possible problems of the railways, it is a good experience to know what their decision and that could be bad if left unattended these problems.
Thank you for your attention!

Результаты (английский) 3:

hello dear members.the topic of my thesis "the effectiveness of railways". to date, this is the important part of the railway transport of russia and europe. the bad efficiency of railways leading to low transport work. people use the railway every day, for example электричками to get from town to town. on the basis of this work, proposed the key factors, how to improve the efficiency and make the efficiency of railways has not declined. in the book, identified the problem of railways, why they occur and what their decision. also, in the translation, i learned a lot of words for its specialty that one word has several meanings in different subjects, such as business, economy and others. the book interested me all kinds of problems in railway, it is a good experience to know what decision and what could be the harm, if those issues.thank you for your attention!