приняв во внимание критику моих кол

приняв во внимание критику моих коллег также были внесены некоторые исправления по оформлению

Результаты (английский) 1:

having taken note of the criticism of my colleagues there have also been some fixes on registration

Результаты (английский) 2:

taking into account the criticism of my colleagues were also made some corrections on registration

Результаты (английский) 3:

Taking into account the criticism my colleagues were also made some corrections in decor